2010-11-10 [Eyonic]: ah okay

2010-11-20 [Ravendust]: pretty decent, her face (eyes, nose mouth at least) is a little small for the head though, and I think that the fins may be a little too slender, but she looks good :)

2010-11-23 [pegasus1000]: Thanks. It is the only time I have drawn a face in that pose.

2010-11-23 [pegasus1000]: New. The scanner was broken so this is a picture of the picture.

2010-11-23 [Chel.]: Cute little interaction here! Crit: The black is a bit harsh and distracts from everything else. Either add black on other places or don't use it. 

2010-11-23 [pegasus1000]: Thanks.

2010-11-23 [Eyonic]: I would have to agree, the black does stick out a bit compared to the other lighter colors.

2010-11-24 [Ravendust]: cute piece, the black does indeed distract the eye from the image as a whole, but its still pretty neat :)

2010-11-24 [pegasus1000]: What other color would you make the stripes??
Or
Where else would I add black to make it not so distracting??

2011-01-03 [pegasus1000]: NEW. Cardinal

2011-01-05 [Ravendust]: interesting, I think for the way its sitting its a little too round though, either that or the wing isn't very proportionate to the body...

2011-01-05 [pegasus1000]: Did you just imply that my bird is fat??? lol. Just kidding I can see what you say in the body being a little round.

2011-01-05 [Aeolynn]: Well, naturally cardinals live in cold weather, and to survive they puff out their feathers for warmth

2011-01-05 [Ravendust]: yes, at the same time though if the feathers are puffed up, its not really noticeable in this

2011-01-05 [Aeolynn]: *shrugs* he looks cold to me lol

2011-01-05 [Eyonic]: it's not fat, just pleasantly plump! Looks great!

2011-01-08 [pegasus1000]: New: Blue Jay. I love little birds.

2011-01-09 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: Very nice! I love it. Was it done in watercolors? The only critique that I can think of, is that the head might be a bit big. Other than that though, you did an awesome job with this piece. :)

2011-01-09 [Eyonic]: either the head is a tad bit big or the legs are too small.... good though!

2011-01-09 [pegasus1000]: color pencil: It's funny, but I am not that great with paint.

2011-01-10 [Aeolynn]: This is honestly, the best work I have seen from you yet. Bravo!